So after watching a documentary last night on Japan and remembering fondly my  journeys there I thought I’d try my hand at some english versions of Haikus – the basics are five syllables for first sentence, seven syllables for second sentence and five for the last one. I wrote them down today while thinking about the past week over lunch…

Broken leaf falls up

Cold fisherman sews his net

Morning sun shines true

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Lustful Dragon cries

Summer wind hot on my face

Her love walks away

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A lonely deer hides

Green leaves blow in the spring wind

Angry Bear gives chase

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I think I”m going to start trying to create Haikus for the hipstamatic photos I take and post here…to help with the mood.

One Response to “Haiku’s – an experiment”

  1. Cindy Fromm Says:

    So weird…been having trouble writing lately and was thinking of revisting the Haiku format. Thanks for the nudge! :-)

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